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A loner in the corner
staring at you
looking for clues
as to who you are

finding nothing he stands
walks away
looking for other people
to fill his clue finding day

watching the rushing people in town
he sits in yet another empty corner
looking out to the crowd
in awe that they lead different lives

each and everyone of them
thinking different things as they pass
checking the time
listening to music

all these different things
happening in the same space of time

the loner concentrates harder
finds himself imagening having a busy life
one full of him having alot more to deal with

nothing like before
nothing like what he had seen before
something different
something unique

trial and error
that'll be the day
when the loner is needed for something useful
©2007-2009 ~xGerardX
:iconxgerardx:

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let me know what you think :)

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:iconn0rks:
Aww, such a sad poem! But it's very powerful at the same time too :)

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It's not my fault I'm curious
It's that thing's fault for being something I've never seen before

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Bitchin'!
:iconxgerardx:
thankyou glad you liked it :)

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Be Yourself, Don't take anyone's shit and never let them take you alive- GERARD WAY-MCR
:iconlalunapequeno:
I loved the narrative aspects of it. I really did like this one. It was really sad and I enjoyed reading it.

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Wishing is the first step^^
Never give up your dreams . . . .
:iconmisunderstoodpoet:
I think its a true and powerful poem, really meaningful.

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Our love is a bed of nails - Bed of Nails by Alice Cooper
:iconn0rks:
You're welcome :)

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It's not my fault I'm curious
It's that thing's fault for being something I've never seen before

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Bitchin'!
:iconxgerardx:
thankyou :)

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Be Yourself, Don't take anyone's shit and never let them take you alive- GERARD WAY-MCR
:iconxgerardx:
thanks alot :)

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Be Yourself, Don't take anyone's shit and never let them take you alive- GERARD WAY-MCR
:iconbassgirl12:
awe dats a sad poem bt it shows at the same time that everyone wants something in their lives
:iconxgerardx:
cheers :) yeh i guess it does show that :)

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Be Yourself, Don't take anyone's shit and never let them take you alive- GERARD WAY-MCR

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